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Dark Poetry #4
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Chrissysue
Junior Member
since 2003-11-21
Posts 23
Nebraska
0 posted 2003-11-21 06:42 PM

I long for something
An unattainable distant dream
I kiss the moon and grasp the stars
But still my dream escapes me
But still my heart yearns
An empty hole
A meloncholy abyss
Where something, somwhere
Was made to fit
I'm embracing thin air
Crying out to deaf ears
I want
I need
I long
For life
Save me, rescue me, from nothing

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River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2003-11-21 08:07 PM

*smiles* this is really good.

              - River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.
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