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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-11-21 05:14 PM


miss you so much
so very much

I miss you so much that
can’t think of
nothing else to say
except
I miss you

miss you so much
so very much

and I am
torn
with no sheets
to stitch me up
no more

every spark
of light is so
very dark

miss you so much
so very much


© Copyright 2003 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-11-21 05:58 PM


Awww this is so sweet. It's not the same without your other half that brings the light. Sweet one for sure. Very nice!
Love,
Terri~

James_A_Fraser
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2 posted 2003-11-23 09:17 AM


Even in dark light, you sparkle.



~~J

Sparticus
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3 posted 2003-11-23 02:33 PM


A chanting day after the aubade.  I enjoyed.


Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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4 posted 2003-11-23 05:05 PM


Yes... I know this so well... and you've captured it perfectly. *S*
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Georgia
5 posted 2003-11-23 11:29 PM


separation only makes the ones involved realize their dependence on the other and so the lonliness is increased.
eor
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6 posted 2003-11-24 12:53 PM


this makes me miss you!  nice write you captured the moment...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
7 posted 2003-11-27 04:25 AM


thanks for the smiles

regards
sudhir

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