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Tomer
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0 posted 2003-11-21 04:51 PM



Ball to the boy,
Swiveled around the tootsie roll,
Shielding the trumpets horn.

Laced through knots,
Trickled through each open eye,
Stars fall through the cracks.

The child’s white oleander skin,
Creamy with innocence,
Layered her sheets ever so secretly.

Touched twice,
Tamed by the lions growl,
Cackled heard swiftly and richly.

Drawn to its fiddle,
Shadowed its take,
Clever changed itself upon its wing.

White oleander richly embraces her deepest smiles.


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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-11-22 11:18 AM


well done
littlewing
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2 posted 2003-11-22 11:38 PM


Tomer . . .
reminded me of a dance with the devil
very nice writing
xxoo

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