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tecoyah
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since 2003-11-16
Posts 83
NY

0 posted 2003-11-20 10:01 PM


tinge of soot on pearly wings
swerving gods glare
chipped faith in that which you are
growing bolder with each discretion
what allegiance is owed?
ignored by masters love
tempting the fate of lucifers patio
brimstone lawnchair soiling robes
tinted shades to show the way

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-11-20 10:20 PM


on your way to hell?
or least you think you are.
you language is very, delicately placed.
I like that it is not in full sentences.
~Lex

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-11-21 11:25 AM


tinted shades to show the way. I like this line. Leaves the intention open. Nice.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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