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Dark Poetry #4

Dancing and Drifting

armanca
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 211
Tennessee

0 posted 2003-11-19 12:36 PM

Tip-toe around the darkness…
Deciding to let a drop in because there
You can feel…and here in the love
You have lost something.

The person you have become
…who are you now?
… who were you then?
dancing around the questions.

Now… it is still lonely
And I feel the same pain.
I am happy…
I am with you…
And I feel the same pain.

You drink life
And I sip your air…
But I can not breathe
You lift me up
I thank you but it doesn’t show.

I look at you with awe…
And I wish I could see
With your eyes…
..who are you now?
… who were you then?

And I wish you could feel with my heart
…While we tip toe around the darkness
Dancing together in a different language
Because sometimes even in the love …
You loose something.

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

1 posted 2003-11-19 03:19 PM

Powerfully written piece!

Great ending.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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