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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

0 posted 2003-11-18 03:13 PM

And the toll of the bell
is this heaven, or hell

to draft my page
with light with rage

or aloft on cloud where no man dwells
this twilight in heathen hell of hells
to listen to the ring of bells

and all the while in denial
of the wretch inside the cell

or of madness did he wonder
or of demons cloaked in thunder

Blundering fool that he is
to weak and timid to claim what's his

the softness of skin shed thin
the rap of the rain on tin
and those monstrous eyes closed in on him

and all the while in denial
of the parcel death does trim

the gloating maidens pranced
while drinking surly danced

blind of the blatant rage he hid
and the murder in his eyes he did

bleeding anguish cried out in sighs
the trembling heart as mortals die
and criminals innocent as they lie

and all the while in denial
of the monstrosity named I

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.
KuruShio (DeadlyBob)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-11-18 04:23 PM

A big of self introspection applied within and without--a wonderful entrance to Passions!

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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-11-18 05:43 PM

Very moving.
Love,
Terri~

KuruShio
Member

since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

3 posted 2003-11-18 07:55 PM

Blaze thank you for the welcome.

thank you for the comment Rose

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.
KuruShio (DeadlyBob)

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-11-20 11:16 PM

very nive write, deep, passioniate...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2003-11-21 01:46 AM

and all the while in denial
of the wretch inside the cell

or of madness did he wonder
or of demons cloaked in thunder

Blundering fool that he is
to weak and timid to claim what's his
fantastic lines here !!!!!!!!!

loved this one

june x

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

6 posted 2003-11-21 11:45 AM

We write from the depths of our own inner feelings. Then to share. One of the more ultimate gifts from our souls. Nice writing.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

KuruShio
Member

since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

7 posted 2003-11-21 02:18 PM

Again thanks for the comments

I wrote this poem from the perspective of a serial killer, who has no concept, or represses his knowledge of the things he does. Thus the "In Denile." lines, other stuff as well but I won't get into that

.

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.
KuruShio (DeadlyBob)

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