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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2003-11-18 12:18 PM



Just when things are going good
my minions come to call
Just a simple voice
to rise above it all
You know that it will never work
things always fall apart
Your are just a painter
always searching for the art
Tell me of the past my friend
how many times before
Has your start been destroyed
in front of your minds door
Just when things are going good
my minions come to call
Smashing dreams and hopes
against your blood stained wall

SMC

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-11-18 09:22 PM


I hear ya and I do understand.

I call those persistant thoughts, "lesser gods"...

hugging you in understanding, m'friend.

always shooting m'self in the foot, I am.

Sheesh.

beckers716
Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39
Ohio
2 posted 2003-11-19 01:34 AM


Wow, You've just perfectly described what I call my "commity"

Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself

Magic Solias
Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73
California, USA
3 posted 2003-11-19 05:18 PM


Tha's right.  We are just painters and the pictures we paint are depictions of past moments, sometimes glories-but all is just a passing.  And yes, especially when it starts out good and all seems to be well, it eithers falls apart or we become aware of its mortality.  My friend, you see things as they are.  But also remember that darkness also only is a passing.  And we also never know what's beyond, and even if we gatch a glimpse, we could still be dreaming.   Thanks for your poem, I'll print it out for better reference.

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

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