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SATURN
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0 posted 2005-11-14 12:48 PM



The Soothing Song you play
That Soothing Song you sing
makes my heart beat with passion.


The Soothing Song you play
That Soothing Song you sing
makes my mind wonder far.


The Soothing Tone of your voice
That Soothing Melody of your song
makes my soul dance and twirl.


The Soothing Pleasure of  your company
That Soothing Touch of your hand
comforts me when I need it the most.


The Soothing Song you play
That Soothing Song you sing
makes my entire being love you more.


MI AMOR
My Soothing Angel
so why did you leave.


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Kaos
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1 posted 2006-01-25 01:59 PM


i thought this was a very neat approach to the topic i loved the concept of 'the soothing song' and the way you ended it, good work

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

SATURN
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2 posted 2006-01-27 12:13 PM


Thanks this was about a friend that left and he didnt know how i felt before he left state.
Kaos
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3 posted 2006-02-13 08:15 PM


that's always tough... i have 3 tattooes dedicated to ones that got away like that... now i feel that it's better to know than never b/c those three still leave me wondering what could've have been to this day... finality is a wonderful thing

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

SATURN
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4 posted 2006-02-14 12:14 PM


thanks your words encourage me to write more. one day i hope we will meet again.
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5 posted 2006-02-14 01:51 PM




I enjoyed this~

Happy Valentine's Day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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SATURN
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6 posted 2006-02-15 06:38 PM


thanks but my valentines day was not so happy b/c i lost a very close friend that day she was only 16.

[This message has been edited by SATURN (02-15-2006 07:44 PM).]

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