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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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0 posted 2003-11-16 08:59 PM



The hero walks away
I am nothing
I've never been anything

Raw
My head hits the floor
It hurts
Pure real Pain

Hurt him, make him pay
The diseased child
20 year old infant
stupid
Don't trust him
Crazy, disgust, disease
Sickness

Hate me
They all hate me
They all hate me
My head hurts

Don't touch me
Stay away
Shut up
Celebrate the hero

Hurt him, make him pay
The diseased child
20 year old infant
Stupid
Don't trust him
Crazy, disgust, disease
Sickness

You want me to leave
I will
You say I won't

This is real

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die.  So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2003-11-16 11:08 PM


You know what i think about your work Craig =) i especially digged the ending too.

                - River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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2 posted 2003-11-17 12:23 PM


thanx River.

GIS

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die.  So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-11-17 02:59 PM


nice write, i loved the line 20 year old infant, sometimes it does feel that way huh?

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-11-18 12:11 PM


sometimes it feels like I still have a bottle in my mouth.

GIS

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