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bgryan
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since 2003-06-16
Posts 30
North Ireland

0 posted 2003-11-15 03:05 PM





Lightning struck
Thunder roared a mighty voice
Everywhere upon the earth
In every corner life stood still.

Tears fell from heaven
Up through the ground
Came a trembling sound
Shook my heart made me cry
God in anger I don’t want to die.

Not a movement did I feel
Then my aura disappeared
Fleeing fast across the sky
She waved to me,said goodbye.

I stood alone and held my breath
As the land was covered
By the seal of hell.

Recalling visions
Before the storm
How the light gave us warmth
With a tender heart full of love
Memories of a white winged dove.

Now it’s over and  you can see
What it’s like to die in misery
With no friend around
To kiss your name
As you are gently
Lower into the ground.


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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2003-11-21 11:20 PM


this is very sad and dark. i liked your rhyme here, it looks very well planned and thought out. good job =)

                 - River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-24 10:17 AM


The end of love and eartly death can feel one and the same. Did you mean lowered?
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