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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2003-11-14 12:23 PM

I step back into the darkness from wence I came
Can't survive in the world of light fore
             It drives me insane
So i'll cling to the shadows like i use to do
              In silent fortitude.
          But i'll be thinking of you
   Cause i've been through all the colors
               Right into the shades
And the place I live in now is darker then the
                      grave
And your the only one who tried to save and felt
                    My grasp
and even though I had to give you up you can be
                     sure
            the memories will last.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

1 posted 2003-11-14 02:44 PM

sad....but lovely.

There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-11-15 12:22 PM

wow, that was beautiful."Cause i've been through all the colors Right into the shades
And the place I live in now is darker then the grave." This whole part just really grapped my heart. I can feel all the love and pain that went into making this. Excellent poem.
~Lex

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

3 posted 2003-11-16 02:46 PM

The bottom drawer of the mind hold all kinds of junk, and treasures too..good job, JJ.
thanx!

Click

Lach Pahtai
New Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 5
Spring Hill Fl

4 posted 2003-11-29 08:31 PM

That was beautiful. I made my heart ache

Be happy while you're alive, for you'll be a long time dead
Christina

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2003-11-30 10:45 PM

Strange that despite all that the darkness holds it seems to be the only place where oneself can feel a semblance of normality, of comfort. Excellent write!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

6 posted 2003-12-03 09:02 PM

...Been thru all the colors...
hmmm...beautiful...
Until..ali {alibaster}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-05-17 04:23 AM

ska babe
Member

since 2005-11-08

Posts 58
nowwhere, IN

8 posted 2005-11-16 07:40 PM

sad but beautiful i love it!

Christioned
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

9 posted 2005-11-17 05:59 PM

I really can realate to this. I like it alot. True it is a sad thing; however, I wouldn't change a thing about it.

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed

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