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0 posted 2003-11-13 12:40 PM



Orange
black diamonds
devils
Satan plays
green llamas
dance
like Lucifer's maidens
in heat
laughter
kills black sheep
inside mother's womb
death
to the masses
as suicide
catches my tongue
in the night,

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
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1 posted 2003-11-15 12:18 PM


That part about suicide, that was awesome. I enjoyed your ranting. I liked your usage of color, created great images in my mind. Nice job.
~Lex

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