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Cycle of Surreality (duet with green_itchy_stuff)
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Cycle of Surreality (duet with green_itchy_stuff) |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
coldness erupt soft peak aggression sunshine recollection terror flee and singe my disturbed face stir the tornado mental stated velvet this epiphany illusion tares at demented soul forgotten realms darkness revealed in flame temporary rapture brimstone and slate light conceal the enemy sinners toll soft blood glows deep inside my head pain inside hurt and scream taken inside taste of truth from bleeding lips damp and moist start to choke gagging relentless my air escapes limp to linger my flesh will quiver my resting place in the midst of this storm aesthetic place dreamy here smile of sympathy. wake from eternal dream loss of sanity gain peaceful serenity from this place of hostility [This message has been edited by River (11-13-2003 12:45 AM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Looks good to me. hehe GIS All that is great once was small. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
 me too, lol. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
at least we like it lol GIS All that is great once was small. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
yeah really, we could keep this thread going forever if we wanted to lolLove hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
We could. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
do you think we'll get in trouble?...*grins evily* but then again, who cares? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I doubt it. Everyone will probably just get tired of seeing it.lol GIS All that is great once was small. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
lol, well maybe they should say something about our poem so that we don't have to keep posting to keep it at the top of the forum |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Well mavbe they're fine with it. Who knows, maybe soneone else will have something to say about it. But as it has gone thuss far I doubt it. Oh well. All that is great once was small. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
HEY! Can I get a word in here...sheesh! Sorry, haven't lurked about in the "dark" lately. But glad I came in to see this. It's always cool to see darklings duetting. Nice write, both of you! ~wranx |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
 I like this you guys, the end was really good. It's cool to see both of your talents combined. nice job |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
awww, look Craig, someone finally said something...=) tw0 ev3n =) and they like it =) kool thanx guys! wee luuv yoooo! ...er...nevermind, this is the dark poetry forum...not C.A. lol. *returns to old dark self* catch u other darkies later. - River |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I guess its not just us anymore. Thanx wranx and Lexy. I guess darkies is what you would call us. Hmmm, yeah that sounds about right. Any way thanx. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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