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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-11-12 11:55 PM



What's Control?
Domination?
The ability of living for someone else?
Ignorance?

Lack of hair.
Voodoo slave
Miserable distant trust
Untrusting
Puke
Spinal cord reception of callous fingers

Personal desire
What I've always wanted
Committment
Honest Insanity
These thoughts deep inside my head
Revealled as art in the light of diety

Freedom of my mind
Choose what I will
Self-confident and discipline
Distant from before
Weakness slip away

From my own
Under solid
Catchy aquaintence
That wall of dark, near the brim
Spill into the light
Its all so clear and bright

Know why and understand
Almost there
Closer and closer
In contact with God
Surrounded
Just a peek
Almost there
To know him
Honest salvation.

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die.  So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
1 posted 2003-11-13 01:44 AM


good stuff...not much more to say there!!!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
2 posted 2003-11-13 08:35 PM


Voodoo...lolz, i don't know y, but the way this word is pronounced makes me laugh even though it's a serius word...but then again...putting pins in dolls expecting someone to feel it is sadly funny anyways...lol...um, ok, your poem, right, i think it was great, you asked some good questions at the beggining...and i can really identify with the rest of this write too...darn it, i could highlight, copy and paste the whole thing and talk about how i agree with it. lol. the ending caught my attention especially though...i was wondering, do you really believe in God? just curius. catch ya laterz bro =).

                   - River
  

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2003-11-13 11:33 PM


Thanx.

I believe in God i believe in a lot more than just him. I believe in the Goddess and the God.  I believe everything has a soul.  I have some pretty deep beliefs, actually.

GIS

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die.  So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

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