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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-11-07 01:27 PM


You Say Don't Let People See


You say, don't let people see
Be very reserved
I don't think that's life
Not one deserved.

If you can’t love
with the frailties there to see
the fragile parts of me.
A good front that’s what is there
But that means nothing, because you don’t care

Please don’t act as if I’m something strong
When I feel I’m falling apart all along.
What? Being human, being fragile,
and weak within
Means what?
I’m something bad…
filled with unpardonable sin?

I’m afraid to speak,
Anymore I don’t know where to begin.
No matter what I say there’s something wrong.
If you’re trying to make me feel I don’t belong
Well speak no more; try no more, I’ve known
that, from you, for so very long.

You say don’t let people see.
But when they keep something to themselves
You say they have something to hide all along
You say don’t let people see
But if they don’t they are hiding, and weak.

Tell me which will it be?
So I can sing the words, the lyrics
to your{/I} song.
[I]Then
maybe it won't be wrong.



[This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-07-2003 01:55 PM).]

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eor
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1 posted 2003-11-07 07:06 PM


sing your own tune...

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-11-07 08:32 PM


Thank you.
Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-08 12:30 PM


oh Terri, this is touching
SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-11-09 09:28 PM


Thank you I appreciate your thoughts.
Love,
Terri~

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