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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Cheap and free To pay her By the hour By the day Minute or month Just enough to cover expense Filth fanatic Muddy morals Dirty deeds Filth inside Warm profit Burst of shame Softly delicate Woman rubber band Ooze and squeeze Painful guilty scream Filth fanatic Muddy morals Dirty deeds Filth inside Way deep inside Hefty fee from me to you Careless charge stupidity Hero super save yourself Trust deceit counterfeit Immune to this emotion Dearly immune to me Filth fanatic {in demand} Muddy morals {I never had} Dirty deeds {as you wish} Filth inside {feel it bleed} We're just whores... ... planetary parasites. All that is great once was small. |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
very unique .....I ve read this a few times....i really like this. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
grenny-i like where you are going with your style, you have something to say...the only thing i would say, is expand on the thoughts, show me, you have really good material here, but i want to see more into it, just a thought... "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx. Ill work on it. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
made me think |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
k, this is really deep, it could be a song or sometin...it reminds me of the outside world the way it is now...i mean, the way it ReAlLy is...so many people are trying to call what they do..."good" when it's really just as dirty as the **** they flush down the toilet every day. great job. =) talk to ya laterz. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh this struck a nerve with me-- I applaud you g.i.s.! Then there's the planetary rapist of big business corporation who trot out their environmental concerns as both a tax write off and a PR campaign... oooh. Sorry. (told ya it struck a "noive".) I liked the passion and the well placed contempt in this. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Everyone has their own interpretation, to me it sounde lile a lady of the night. I enjoyed the read. Maggie |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
A very strong write, which to me represents the things people have to do to either justify their existence, or simply the things they have to do to exist (prostitution?). It's a dirty world and we are indeed parasites. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanks passing shadows River- thats kind of the idea except this is {at least for me} about an individual who Ive recently met. Who has a very strong potential to get me in "trouble" thanx serenity- this isnt exactly friend-to-friend with big buisness. cusick- yeah its something like that. madd- well when push comes to shove, just shove harder. lol All that is great once was small. |
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