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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-11-07 08:15 AM


I am nothing
if not the reason
anymore

Which hands are to weave through
the sodden mesh of locks
painted upon breast and bone

~within grasp, clench and near miss

Tracks upon blades of shoulder
escape to thigh
underneath this
I may sob softly within the crackle of waters entwined
the long day
is over
the long swallow
just begun

Swollen eyes downpour
under these showers
camouflage steady flow of unforgotten

There is
continuous rift between myself and I


Finding autumn among moonbeam
upon the sleepwalk home

Finding mistakes
regrets
reminders and similar things
upon fallen yellow.

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2003-11-07 10:34 AM


nice.

GIS

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die.  So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

ranidae_poet
Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66
Texas,USA
2 posted 2003-11-07 12:40 PM


wonderful read , thanks for sharing this.
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-11-07 07:09 PM


beautiful

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-11-08 12:40 PM


damn gemma
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-17 04:00 AM


and damn again
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 2004-05-17 06:00 AM


I may sob softly within the crackle of waters entwined

you blow me away Gem.. have I told you that?



Mxx


The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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