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Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2003-11-07 01:04 AM



They said when your face hit the ocean floor
That it would make the sand so elaborately beautiful
Water doesn’t make us fonder
It only makes us thunder
Only blood may wander
Through the waves where her wild rests
From water to water
This death does do us departed
An end, to something we should never have started

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2003-11-07 01:26 AM


I have a suspicion this is about a girl.  And in which case I completely understand.  Chicks are psychos.

GIS

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die.  So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-11-08 12:44 PM


damn
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

3 posted 2003-11-29 09:52 PM


"They said when your face hit the ocean floor
That it would make the sand so elaborately beautiful" These lines are beautiful.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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