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Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

0 posted 2003-11-06 08:25 PM

Once the taste of Death claims its existence upon thy tongue
and thy wrist
The longing may never cease to be
For the addiction claims the life so unfortunate and of pity
Never to be full again in incompleteness
Never to breathe easy
I am not alive
I am not

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-11-07 01:00 AM

And yet we still exist.

GIS

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die. So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

2 posted 2003-11-07 01:07 AM

Never to breathe easy
I am not alive
I am not

Sometimes I wonder if I'm alive. Some things in life are just too un-real to cope with. Amazing write.

MidnightMoon
New Member

since 2003-11-07

Posts 2

3 posted 2003-11-07 01:47 AM

"Once the taste of Death claims its existence upon thy tongue
and thy wrist
The longing may never cease to be"

All I have to say is WOW, the Power of this poem is immense.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

4 posted 2003-11-07 05:34 AM

ooh, i will tell you my secret now...*whispers* "I see dead people...aaall the time" =).
ok, seriusly now, this was just groovy dude =) great job. =).

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

5 posted 2003-11-07 06:34 AM

Thanks guys. I've been feeling a little dry lately, good thing I was able to get this out, though. Thanks for readin'.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

6 posted 2003-11-07 12:57 PM

this a great write and the TITLE....love the title.

There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create.

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

7 posted 2003-11-07 05:53 PM

Thanks a lot, yea, I like the title as well!

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

8 posted 2003-11-07 07:19 PM

all in all is all we are

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-11-08 12:38 PM

hmmm...I know what you mean

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

10 posted 2003-11-08 12:41 PM

Kurt Cobain said it best. Thanks.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

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