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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-11-05 05:28 PM


Spread away the endless days,
pin them to the stars.
Where the blood drips, where it flows
marks us where we are.
Kill the electricity,
swallow its blue glow.
We are midnight constellations,
snow-bright white we glow.
Where we fall will mark the blood
dripping as we land.
There to spread our waiting days
into waiting hands.

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1 posted 2003-11-05 06:05 PM


"Kill the electricity,
swallow its blue glow.
We are midnight constellations,
snow-bright white we glow."

Mike, you rock

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2003-11-05 06:15 PM


Thanks, Susan.
Lexy
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3 posted 2003-11-05 06:39 PM


this made me gasp. it was so beautiful, so natural. it deserves to be in a book. your my idol.
~Lex

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4 posted 2003-11-05 06:58 PM


Aw, that's sweet of you. Thanks, Lexy.
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5 posted 2003-11-06 08:25 AM


Spread away the endless days,
pin them to the stars--- Nice.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2003-11-06 02:30 PM


Thx, poe.
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7 posted 2003-11-08 12:50 PM


gawd
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8 posted 2004-05-17 03:56 AM


awesome!
littlewing
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9 posted 2004-05-18 09:08 AM


and may those hands hold us as gentle as a bird in palm, always . . .
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10 posted 2004-05-19 12:55 PM


Lovely
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