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coyote
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since 2001-03-17
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0 posted 2003-11-01 08:03 PM



look out upon a reddening sea
breathing in the tides
as Apollo rises
and Venus receives him
in the reaches of paradise

draw deeply and exhale
expelling the stale air
of a mocked morality
where hominids dwell
in the Greek tragedy
of their fallen godliness

we are carnal vessels
commissioned in Eden
dressed in unholy vestments
keeled for deep water
and seeking a New World

lust is the wind
shredding our sails
desire is a hurricane
and this heading
is dead reckoned
into her eye

"Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead,

© Copyright 2003 coyote - All Rights Reserved
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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1 posted 2003-11-02 05:13 AM


Wow coyote, this is very powerful and will have to be re- read before further comment. Maggie
coyote
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2 posted 2003-11-02 08:55 AM


Thanks, Maggie.
Your read and comments are most appreciated.

coyote 8)

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-11-02 12:01 PM


coyote

what insight you have My God:

we are carnal vessels
commissioned in Eden
dressed in unholy vestments
keeled for deep water
and seeking a New World

yes yes yes indeed
xxoo

coyote
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

4 posted 2003-11-02 08:29 PM


Thanks, littlewing.
You are very insightful yourself.
I appreciate your kind comments.

CB 8)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-08 01:11 PM


what a perspective! I like this!
coyote
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6 posted 2003-11-08 04:16 PM


Thanks, passing shadows.
I appreciate the read and your kind comments.

coyote 8)

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