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Dark Poetry #4

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Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-10-26 08:07 PM

One desire
Wraps and pulls me under
Sinking deep
Into the darkest breach
Don’t worry
You never cared anyways
Bringing me closer
To the end I’ve always dreamt
No more pain
Of this broken and battered heart
No more crushed dreams
Just let me heal, and be happy within the dark
Down and down I go
Further from your embrace
And further from happiness

-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

1 posted 2003-10-26 08:31 PM

STOP! You keep writing the way I feel :P, very nice, very nice indeed...totaly relatable.

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

2 posted 2003-10-26 08:38 PM

haha thanks :-P im glad you liked it :-D

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-08 01:47 PM

I am going through this right now...thanks for the read

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-11-09 03:36 PM

Beautiful, sad poem. Just remember we only have one life. Hugs, Maggie

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

5 posted 2003-11-09 07:33 PM

thank you both...i thought this poem was dead but magically it came back up?
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

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