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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Im not a fake I exist and will for sometime Predecessors and ancestry have done the same Eternal cyclic constant in life Bend the truth til it breaks Plant the seeds of a ravaged harvest Spring comes quiet heinous pit fall Harm hurt remorse disperse Brutal mess result Dubbed false fake Pasted and established firm Hanging execute lies in truth Slower mind understand Cold undead to comprehend Accusations to Hell they send What if you were wrong The process picture step by step Taken at stride and skip a beat Error The damage stays Never strays This bleeding cut of ignorance Eternal gush of permanence a trickle of music from a well |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice post, sounds like society break - down. poe If nothing is something |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
greeny, i liked this woindering why it has gotten so little attention, peopel probally don't understand it, i liked this very much "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
i liked that...especially the last rhyme...it just totally drives it home great write There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx for the response poe. Thanx eor, I wish more people could understand me sometimes, and other times Its like if they did, It would make ME wonder. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx Starsfalling, Im glad you liked it. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
The damage is already done. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I Cant Say I Really Understand It But I Really Liked It~!~ |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx Shara- I guess you understand the idea or at least the secrets. Thanx s1nly- Im glad you enjoyed it even with the difficulty it presents in understanding. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I liked this poem very much and sometimes I think it's best that we don't let people understand what we mean, it lets people take something of their own from a poem. Wonderful write. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Craig no one usually understands me , is a good thing let them take from you what they need and keep the rest for yourself I exist and will for sometime Predecessors and ancestry have done the same Eternal cyclic constant in life sounds like evolution . . . reminded me of the big bang theory actually see? xxoo |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I lie not - I love the title...it has like...something poetic about it in itself and I have no idea what it is that makes it sound so good...but woah...and that's just the title...I mean, this poem is...music to my poetic ears...(into the library this one goes) luv it Bro, keep up the groovin =) - River p.s. by the way, i for one DiD understand this  Love hurts as bad as it feels good. [This message has been edited by River (10-29-2003 08:33 PM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
You guys are great. I posted this in another site and no one responded. And here several of you have, and a few even understand it. Thanx to all. If anyone wants to know what I had in mind just ask me, either here or by e-mail. Thanx. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
um...I read this REALLY slow, to see if I could soak it in better, your poetry is never a quick read. Your poetry always reflects to me, a disgust of the condition and actions of the world. It seems you hunger for truth. Please email me explaining this. I'm very interested. Your words are amazing. Thanks for this. ~Lex  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
You said thank you for the read. Well, thank you for reading. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat perspective |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I could only offer what I THINK it means (you should see what I can do with an INKBLOT--grin) but I loved the pace and tone, and yes, I'm VERY interested in hearing your breakdown of it. Sometimes it takes a little study of a poet to understand their work, and you are well worth the time and effort m'friend. Enjoyed, and I wait (as patiently as I know how) for your illumination.  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you passing shadows Senerity- is it denial or stupidity. I have been in the midst of a religion change and have finally decided Wicca. Ive been in this bit for some time now and I feel Ive made the right choice. And is denial of the abilities or stupidity of the abilities right for their criticism. Its basically just a comparison poem. All that is great once was small. |
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