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~*DrAgOnFLY*~
Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 29
Haven of Abyss

0 posted 2003-10-23 02:45 AM


Fading away
And disappearing
I’m not hearing
What you have to say
I won’t be here tomorrow
I feel so far away
It’s slowly slipping from me
There’s little more to say
No one cares to save me
No ones really there
It’s all a dream
Please don’t be scared
I’ll always be with you
No matter where my spirit flies
I’m in your heart
I’m in your soul
All and all I will not die

"You laugh because I'm different, I laugh because you're all the same"
Forever 'N Always <><
~*DrAgOnFLY*~

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Asian Rain
Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73

1 posted 2003-10-23 11:39 AM


Love your title!  Sometimes life does seem like a wisp caught in the wind.

"No matter where my spirit flies
I’m in your heart
I’m in your soul
All and all I will not die"

Wonderful sentiment and wonderful lines!

Asia

*Inque Monroe*
Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43
No where special
2 posted 2003-10-24 04:16 PM


Cay,

Thats awesome ^^ the last lines are really great, keep it up.

River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
3 posted 2003-10-29 08:21 PM


=) luv u sis =)

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-11-08 01:41 PM


I can relate well...long story, but yeah, I understand this one deeply
redrobin21865
Junior Member
since 2003-11-09
Posts 12
Florida, USA
5 posted 2003-11-09 10:56 PM


AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work


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