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iMMuNe
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2003-10-22 05:44 PM


My Soul

So much pain and anger,
The threat of a man- a stranger,
Yet little did we know he stole,
What was so important to the soul- my soul.

His role,
Was an unbeliever,
A deceiver in thoughts,
The Devils retreiver.

He blackened the heart,
Changed my mind tinted it with dark,
Trying to fight what I could not,
See, hear, or feel- he left me to rot.

Days and weeks go by,
The torment of voices inside,
Lied to- denied,
Afraid to seek the light for it may make me blind.

  

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~*DrAgOnFLY*~
Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 29
Haven of Abyss
1 posted 2003-10-23 02:47 AM


good write, it shows character and potential.

"You laugh because I'm different, I laugh because you're all the same"
Forever 'N Always <><
~*DrAgOnFLY*~

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