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iMMuNe
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2003-10-22 05:36 PM


The Future

Chills run down my arm,
The Hair begins to rise,
Fire runs rampant the world suffered with lies,
Family- friends had died.

Cratered earth,
A darkened darkness,
Lived to see this since birth,
But now it comes to haunt us.

Defeaned by the screams,
Of hate and sin,
Wrapped around something that started to begin,
Nothing is what it seems,

Illusions manifest in the minds of everything,
Blank scenes for miles nothing happening,
A silence from the violence of the last century,
I'm born now- only me.

What I see is the future,
Reality,
Bound to happen sooner or later,
Whats the matter?

Eventually a stepping ladder,
Are you scared because its true its gonna happen,
Did I just make you sadder,
I'm sorry,

I speak the truth when I seem worried.

  

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-10-22 05:46 PM


"I speak the truth when I seem worried."

smile.

Indeed. I was  told I have a negative attitude. I replied that I was simply a "realist".

OH.



grin..heh heh? Maybe we were BOTH right?

loved this.

iMMuNe
Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA
2 posted 2003-10-22 05:52 PM


Hehe, I think we are both right. thanks for the replies, appreciate it. Any critique would be nice if you see errors, etc

You guys like mah family..hehe.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-10-22 06:06 PM




I love this place too.

(and pssssssssst...check your spelling of "deafened"?)



hugs to ya. That stuff drives me nuts too.

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