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Soul Sepulchre Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 29Tennessee, USA |
((In advance, I apologize for the shortness and form lacking style of this poem. I wrote it with very little time on my hands when I was bored.)) Stringless puppet, don't be sad The day is bright and new Stringless puppet, it's not that bad I'll sew your strings anew Stringless puppet, smile so sweet Evening's far from gone Stringless puppet, torn and beat I'll sew your strings anew Stringless puppet, resting still The season is now right Stringless puppet, tears so real I'll sew your strings anew Stringless puppet, pulled aside Your arms and legs hang limp Stringless puppet, smiling wide I'll sew your strings anew Stringless puppet, pale face gleaming The morn is almost come Stringless puppet, happy seeming I've sewed your strings anew... Jeremy - |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
It's been a long time since I've been in here, Soul. I'll have to look up some more of your work if this is what you accomplish with "little time on your hands." Well done. "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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swow finix Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 14here but nowhere now |
soul sepulchre, little time on your hands huh? with this poem you have accomplished with a "little time" what i can't do in a day. i love this poem, it has this dark quality but,a amazing amount of hope the i didn't expect. thanx for sharing. swow finx ~be who you want-belive what you want~ |
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