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cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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0 posted 2003-10-19 01:20 PM


Frustration

When I was small
and trees
touched the sky,
paradise was easy
to breach.

Now I am taller
trees are smaller,
heaven is just
out of reach.


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Asian Rain
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 73

1 posted 2003-10-19 01:37 PM


Excellent write!

Asia

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
2 posted 2003-10-19 01:47 PM


wow !!!!!!  maggie what a brilliant and perfect expression.

this is excellent.
hugs from june x

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