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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
Moonlight shining in the darkness The ocean waves are crashing down I am the starlight in the starnight Come to me the world’s misery I will make you joyful and happy Wash away the sadness like waves All across the midnight striking Remember me your starlight moving As the moonlight shines in the darkness The ocean waves are crashing down I am the starlight in the starnight Moving close to wipe away your frown I will be by your side I will light up your sky Take your pain and hold it down Misery and painfully They will be erased With me In the end, the music stops The starlight shines slowly burning, Out, but remember me My midnight friend I will soon be back by you Let your pain subside And don’t you burn out Like the starlight did As the moonlight shines in the darkness As the waves are crashing down I am the starlight in the starnight Dreamer, Please always remember me. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
wow...this is an awsome awsome poem...I love this! great job! i'm adding it to my library it's so good. =) - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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~*DrAgOnFLY*~ Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 29Haven of Abyss |
*claps* love it love it love it sis!!! ur great as always, and just in case youre wondering..."wandering in darkness" referred to...our friend. anyway, i wrote that ages ago but decided to post it ne way. ne wayz, keep it up, *hugs tor tor*  "You laugh because I'm different, I laugh because you're all the same" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed this too. You captured an oriental flavor of myth and tone--the voice of this reminded me of translation of anime'in fact. Welcome to passions. And yes, I do hope to be reading more of you soon.  |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
Welcome! Enjoyed your poem very much and look forward to reading more of your work. Asia |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
lovely poem. enjoyed muchly here hugs june x |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
pssssssst....check your e mail for a special greeting of welcome from the Passions family! |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
*face turns red* i must've forgotten to check the add to library button...grrr...*checking now* =) Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Soul Sepulchre Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 29Tennessee, USA |
Congratuatlions baby. I've always loved this poem of yours, and it's great to know that other people do to. Maybe you'll listen to me from now on when I say something is good? Lol. -Hugs tight and kisses- keep it up. |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
^^ Thanks everybody, I put my best poem in first, I hope my others may be liked as well. and Serenity, that is a really neat e-card, thanks. |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
P.S. Incase you don't know the member Soul Sepulchre is my fiancee ^^ |
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swow finix Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 14here but nowhere now |
inque monroe i am stunned. that is all i can say, amazing. ~ swow finix ~be who you want-belive what you want~ |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
Thanks everyone for the feedback ^^ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible! |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful.... hope to read more of your work keep up the writing. Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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