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Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
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0 posted 2003-10-15 08:44 PM


Alchemic rhythm
Flowing with a solitary beat
It’s transgression is it’s hearts pump
The bodies mingling together
Corpses bond with angels
And angels dream of demons
The right, the wrong, they collide
The room becomes interred and fallow
Damned to the dirt of its creation
A golden liquid bonds the cuts
The rhythm cannot seep in
It’s ripping at the bond that it created
The angels now are screaming
As the corpses un-cage the star
The demons now are bleeding
As the beat undoes the sugar on the floor
We were the air and we were the world
You could breathe it in
And you could bleed it out
We were the air and we were the world
Now were just dancing off
The tip of the universe


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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
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1 posted 2003-10-15 09:31 PM


well, this paints a new picture in my mind..."angels dream of demons" ... bleeding demons...screaming angels - certainly different from what i guess i'm used to hearing about. good job !

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

[This message has been edited by River (10-15-2003 09:33 PM).]

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