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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-10-15 10:34 AM


Reach out, and sublime,
this only lasts for a time.
Those thoughts
You know, you hide,
the reason – why.
They call during the bright
when the day looses to night.
Casting jewels with rings to hold,
our grip, how tight,
which side to go.
These passing thoughts seem to know
how many lose, with
the rings of gold.
So listen -
for the cry is brief,
our thoughts, their moments
this life, and that - other crest,
we seek.
Where the heights –
Of destiny lies.
From that fear, on the other side.



If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (10-15-2003 10:49 AM).]

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eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-10-15 04:12 PM


nice write poe, sounds very medievilish, don't know if you were going for that, but i liked

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

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