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Dark Poetry #4

Dancing Colors

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-10-14 06:21 PM

Dancing colors,
At the edge of the peripherals
Bright and fantastic
And yet…
Still there is nothing
But for a dull pain
Hidden deep within…
The shadows,
Lurking
Lay here waiting,
For one with an angel’s eyes,
To scare away the demons…
And let in the light
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

Asian Rain
Member

since 2003-10-11

Posts 73

1 posted 2003-10-15 01:59 PM

Waiting for the light...know that feeling quite well.

Asia

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

2 posted 2003-10-15 02:02 PM

This piece failed to grab me, at the start. I almost didn't finish reading it. But the last few lines made it worthwhile.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-10-15 04:28 PM

intresting...

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

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