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Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2003-10-14 03:18 PM



Do you enjoy my bitterness
Relish my decay?
Or does my soul disgust you?
Would you turn your head away?
Nothing hurts me deeper
Is a crueler cross to bear
Nothing worse than solitude
Growing in this narrow air

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2003-10-14 04:10 PM


I liked this piece.  It was short and to the point, but packed a punch at the end.  Well done!
~Alicia

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-10-14 04:47 PM


Seems sad to resolve to solitude. :'(
Love,
Terri~

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