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Forget Your Goodbye
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Forget Your Goodbye |
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MIAK New Member
since 2003-10-13
Posts 4 |
Forget Your Goodbye No goodbye, no last kiss. No more memories for me to miss. Don't say the words you're about to say. I know in my heart that you can not stay. You look at me and see my pain. You know my heart is already slain. You know I'll drag this out until we die. Don't wipe my tears they need to cry. Quit saying you love me, I know this to be true. Quit trying to hug me, I need to get over you. Just walk out the door, please don't look back. Don't mind the glass, when the windows crack. Please just go, I said don't look as I cry. Just go, I know you won't be back. Just forget Your goodbye! |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
ouch. (hatred rubs his chest) good write. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Oh Wow! Boy haven't we all been there! Very good write! ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
"You know I'll drag this out until we die. Don't wipe my tears they need to cry. Quit saying you love me, I know this to be true." These lines grabbed me... Great read, I enjoyed it much. ~Alicia |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Oh wow. This definitely grabbed me in the first line and didn't let go until the end. Very nice job. Beautifully written. *I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sad |
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