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Days Anew |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Fingertips touch, on crystal seas shore. Blue lagoons weep their mist at my feet. Soft whispers of things to come, I adore. Waiting for things to come in futures greet. Days anew, excitement comes, a tingle up my spine. Visions of things not shadowed with days of yore. Day’s ahead not ancient history, I know I'll be just fine. Opportunity knocks, and it will, when praying for more. Memories to make; I won't have to fake; they will be true. Filled with good things to come ahead, not dread. Fortunes shine will find me, and tell me it's due for me and for you. No more sorrow, no more tears will we need to shed. And when the morning wakes me, sadness will not quake me. Kindness, and love will be my thoughts, in sorrows stead. Shine I can on others, caught in pain I won't be. On paths that have hurt others I won't have to tread. Good things for others will be all I will see. The flow of me will be to reach out any way I can, to give love, and strength, and help others shine. When I think of these, waiting for futures greet. Days anew; excitement runs up my spine. Soft whispers of things I adore. My minds crystal blue shores. Being less of me, giving more. Things won't be like before! This is dedicated to someone I have hurt very much, because I was blind, and did not see what I was doing. It’s my promise to him to work on never being blinded by self again! I was incredibly self-absorbed, and he deserves so much more! This is the best I can give back to him for all the patience, and love he showed. I posted in dark because this was the darkest near 5 years of my life, and I did it to myself. And yes this sounds self-absorbed, but this is about me, purposely. I only hope he will forgive someday even if he keeps it to himself that he did. All the best to you dear, dear, man!!!! Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shara: Visions of things not shadowed with days of yore. YES indeed what peace that would be and m'dear you need only forgive yourself and everything falls into place from there which it sounds like exactly what you are doing . . . no one is perfect . . . me? farrrr from it . . . I have much to atone for and within this . . . I see THAT *smile* xxoo |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Shararose I think this is your best poem and I don't think for a moment that you are self absorbed. You have suffered and it is only natural to lick your wounds. This poem sounds very optomistic and I wish you all the best in the future. Love and hugs,Maggie |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Maggie. I appreciate that very much. I was fortunate enough to be able to see something I had lost sight of about a most beautiful, wonderful person. One I met that changed the course of my fortune in life. Richer, and that by far, I am, for having met him. My eyes were opened again. I just regret I hurt him. More than words will ever be able to say. Thank you, again.  Love, Terri~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
A very reflective, well written and heartfelt write. |
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