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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

0 posted 2003-10-12 02:58 AM

Boom sha lak lak,
Boom sha lak lak,
Boom sha lak lak boom,
Boom sha lak lak boom.

Cast off the shackles of mental slavery away from your minds
This world revolves around star times moon times sky,
Unparallel to any mental being,
Yet children continue to play their games-

Existence within the parameter of mind
life
knowledge

Hanging in the balance between

Decay and Death
Lifeand Misfourtune
Hereand There
Ink and Blood

Laugh like the silent screems of solictors snickering-
Broken insights captured by photographs,
Incomplete thoughts portrayed by puns,
Life fallen short of its undue misery,

Ink my body Tell my soul
Know thy heart through thy blood.

Boom sha lak lak,
Boom sha lak lak,
Boom sha lak lak boom,
Boom sha lak lak boom.

Love lorn
Love loss
Life leaves
Let lie
Loneliness low.

Dead like the bouquet of roses hanging above your bed,
Symbolize a loss of what was once there-
Rip those shackles from your life!

Death becomes us-
Birth deceives us-
Hurt breeds fear-
In my coffin of black,
Release the from the mental powers that be.

Boom sha lak lak,
Boom sha lak lak,
Boom sha lak lak boom,
Boom sha lak lak boom.

Mental insights in a world where
Knowledge is fading
Ignorance
Is bliss.
Real
Eyes
That
This
Is
All
A
Co
Inside
Ence.

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-10-12 11:15 AM

Hi Matt..I'm not sure I know what this means, but I could tell it was heartfelt. Thanks for sharing, because I always love reading you. I just love it! Intriguing!! Here's hoping all is well with you!!!

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-10-12 12:51 PM

Matt:

ahhh I love this:

Death becomes us-
Birth deceives us-

and this reminded me of Rage Against the Machine . . . the passion involved
with ideals . . .
well written . . . too many lines
to quite here
*smile*
xxoo

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-10-12 01:46 PM

and may the sword from the light, guide the strike. As to know the difference. Outstanding eor, and with beautiful emotion.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

4 posted 2003-10-12 02:28 PM

Very nicely written, I will have to read this a few more time to get the gyst of what you are trying to say, as it is a fairly complex piece. I love it though, thanks for the write.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

5 posted 2003-10-12 04:03 PM

Eor, this is very deep and thought provoking. You are right, life goes on come what may. Thanks for the read. Maggie

Asian Rain
Member

since 2003-10-11

Posts 73

6 posted 2003-10-12 08:17 PM

A very intense and passionate write.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2003-10-13 12:46 PM

Wow dude! I think this is the best Ive ever seen from you. The boom shak.... grabs your attention every time it appears.
Youre a bada$$ with this one. Loved it.

GIS

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

8 posted 2003-10-13 07:01 PM

wow, this is really intense...i'm not sure i understand what the boom sha thing was about...but whatever, either way, very groovy! luvin it bro!

- River

A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past, live in the present.

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

9 posted 2003-10-14 01:27 AM

^
| Like your new constructive critism quote... IS it new, or am I just hallucinating again?

This piece, seems so... rejuvenating.

Inspired by some inkwork? Inquisitive, almost, as well. Seems very well thought out and drew me in with the rythym of this piece. Much enjoyed, as always, Matt.
*Add*
~Alicia

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

10 posted 2003-10-15 04:07 PM

thanks everybody for your replies, i have been away fpr a while, so sorry, but i appreciate it...

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-05-17 04:09 AM

powerful!

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

12 posted 2004-05-20 09:57 AM

thanks!

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

13 posted 2004-05-26 10:50 AM

blast from the past eh? dang it eor...I read this when I was just starting in pip and i still remember it! in fact the boom sha lak lak has gotten stuck in my head many times like a never ending song and yet i find myself reading this over and over again! great piece, lets see how long we can keep this going, lol.

- River

Running out of pain

Theory
Junior Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 23
N. CA. USA

14 posted 2004-05-26 02:23 PM

man this is great, deep,very passionate for sure, definitely makes you want to read more than once to dig into it and pick it apart. very cool

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

15 posted 2004-05-27 10:30 AM

yeah river, i saw this back up here and was like huh?? but thanks for taking another look at it, very cool! and thanks theory for your comments

Beauty is truth, truth beauty

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