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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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0 posted 2003-10-11 11:53 PM



A simple man
Innocent kind
The very best
Plastic coated perfect world

Smoother the voice
The bigger the promise
Fatter checks pyro eternity
Lost soul into oblivion

Shes beautiful proud greedy
Selfish harsh with a title of kindness
If you died she care
Cameras flashing she'd care

A way from it all
Its hot in here
Melt, burnt, Ashes in death
The hottest trend

Innocent let him die
Let him burn
She's a lie
Profit

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-10-12 02:23 AM


aint it grand to be back...btw...liked this one

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-10-12 01:00 PM


Hey Craig:

ahhh yes perfect:

Smoother the voice
The bigger the promise

kinda scary actually . . .
*smile*
loved this
xxoo

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2003-10-13 12:39 PM


Thanx guys.  Sorry its been so long.  Ive been kinda busy.  And the site was down for a while. Thanx again.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Asian Rain
Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73

4 posted 2003-10-13 11:20 AM


"Smoother the voice
The bigger the promise"

Great lines and a great read.

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
5 posted 2003-11-09 06:18 PM



green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
6 posted 2003-11-09 10:24 PM


thanx

GIS

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die.  So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

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