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RioTgUrL
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since 2003-08-25
Posts 8


0 posted 2003-10-11 12:53 PM



don't know what to do

losing self-conciousness

they said it was cool

never passed high skool

some people would do

the way they want it to

never seems to work out

but anyways...for who?



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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-10-12 02:45 PM


Rio:

I see a similarity with your thoughts
wherein they read like a rap tune
falling down the page . . .
for who?  

strangely, all of us have our time
*smile*
xxoo

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