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ShannonMarie
Member

since 2003-09-09

Posts 55
in a state of being

0 posted 2003-10-02 11:55 AM

I guess I will never know the answers
to the questions in my mind
I never hear my heartbeat
beat with yours in time

I'll never know how it feels
with your breath upon my skin
I'll never know just how it feels
to let someone else in

Never hear the words
I have longed for you to say
Never know the joy
because now you've gone away

Never share with you the things
that lovers often do
No hugs and kiss no nothing
not even "I love you"

Never did you say goodbye
Never did you try
Never will you show me
but you taught me to cry

Never should I morn for you
for my heart you did break
you showed me what love was not
so it is you I thank

love like you will never be hurt

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2003-10-02 08:25 PM

oh hun, i've been there before...i heard a saying once that expresses this Perfectly..."Love hurts as bad as it feels good" ... so true, dont you think? God loves you hun, the RIGHT way. =) great write. =) luvin it!

River Mae

A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past, live in the present.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

2 posted 2003-10-14 01:39 PM

Shararose this is so poignant, it brings tears to my eyes but I know that you are strong. Hugs , Maggie

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-10-14 02:03 PM

Well Cusick I didn't write this, but I wish I had this talent to write like this. Thank you so much for the kind words, and for the hug as well. That was sweet of you.
Shannon Marie, I hope things are better for you soon if this is a personal experience. Very sad write.

Love,
Terri~

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

4 posted 2003-10-14 03:21 PM

I wish I could have found a more appropriate venue for this comment, since it's completely irrelevant to the poem, but you didn't provide an email address or anything. I feel the compulsion to mention that my legal name is also Shannon Marie, although I've adopted Shay. Very interesting coincidence.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

ShannonMarie
Member

since 2003-09-09

Posts 55
in a state of being

5 posted 2003-10-14 05:26 PM

very cool that we have the same name... *hugs* if you want my e-mail it is hell_kitty23@hotmail.com.... thank you all for the kind words!! I will be writing more soon.
Shannon Marie

love like you will never be hurt

MIAK
New Member

since 2003-10-13

Posts 4

6 posted 2003-10-14 06:29 PM

Ahhh, I remember not to long ago I had those same feelings. Only good part about that kind of pain is the great poetry that follows. Good Job!!

ShannonMarie
Member

since 2003-09-09

Posts 55
in a state of being

7 posted 2004-03-16 11:32 PM

and in the end, I became the true winner....

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

8 posted 2004-05-02 06:18 PM

omg this is sad.....
just hang in there......i love this poem

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

9 posted 2004-05-02 10:30 PM

oh wow. I loved it. The rhyming.. everything, was amazing. I do think i will save this. If thats okay with you.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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