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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-09-30 10:25 PM

"Shut up!", I said
to none but me
"You think too much -
just let me be!
I've listened to you
far too long and
what have I to show?"

Nothing...
not a single thing
for years of
doing what was 'right''
The 'good girl'...
that was me you know
but underneath,
this very day,
a rebel angel
grows her wings -
finds her too long
muted voice and
hears the music's
rhythmed breath...

She moves her body
to the dance
and smiles
because she breathes

~Vicky L. Raynes

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-30-2003 11:11 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-10-01 07:52 PM

a good girl, yes that is me. Isn't it funny how being good can make you feel bad. that clean is oppisite from dirty. Ironic. Nice poem...got my brain juices flowin'
~Lex

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2003-10-02 03:00 PM

"not a single thing
for years of
doing what was 'right''"

Oh yes... love it

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-10-02 08:34 PM

I always thought there was someone else hiding there sis
*smile*

xxoo

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2003-10-03 06:41 PM

"She moves her body
to the dance
and smiles
because she breathes"

Great ending, Vicki.

I enjoy reading "freedom".

coyote :0

"Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead,

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-10-03 10:20 PM

WARNING WARNING WARNING

You are in the mind of serenity. Please observe the safety drill. Proceed to the illuminated exit in an orderly fashion and remember our rules of courtesy.

Be advised--THIS IS NOT A DRILL.

And at any cost, MY GOD/DESS WOMAN--REMAIN CALM!!!

(And of course? Have a very "Disney" day!")

ROFL...

Don't say you weren't warned lady!

Hugs and chuckles...

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-03-2003 10:21 PM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

6 posted 2003-10-04 12:49 PM

smiling and serenity and wanting to cry after what vicky writes.

thanks sweet lady

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

7 posted 2003-10-13 09:00 PM

THIS...I love.....
Doesn't it feel good to breathe.....

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (10-13-2003 09:03 PM).]

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2003-10-13 09:33 PM

Aha - The Other Side of Vicky... kewl...

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