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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia

0 posted 2003-09-28 07:48 AM



ive used this to get myself outta depression on more than one occasion

Why do ppl judge me
why do ppl stare
even i have feelings
but ppl just dont care

i may not be pretty
i may not b thin
i may not b that smart
but at least i think for my self

you people always givin me (edited by Moderator)
you ppl who like to dis me
well all you ppl can go to hell

i dont need you
or your (edited by Moderator)

why do ppl hate me???
i guess its coz they just aint me!!!!



this is me.... like it or not....
its who i am!

[This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (09-28-2003 03:37 PM).]

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Why
Junior Member
since 2003-09-26
Posts 32
Middle of nowhere
1 posted 2003-09-28 09:25 AM


that was a nice poem. it could use a little revision though

Poems free us and trap us all the same.
But still they put our hearts at ease.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-09-28 12:47 PM


Melissa . . .
all of us have had these very same feelings, it is their problem, not yours

but at least i think for my self

THIS, m'dear makes you beautiful and strong
stick to it
nice vent
xxoo

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2003-10-01 05:11 AM


thanks for the replies.
i have been to the point where even this hasnt worked on me. thankfully i didnt do anything stupid and talked to a person above all that i could trust.
if you are in the same sorta mind frame my email box is always open but your best option is to talk to a professional shrink.

Deep_Inside
Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
4 posted 2003-10-01 02:37 PM


i thought this was awsome, hit somewhere inside and me a warm type thingy. thanks for the read keep righting hope to see more
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