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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
sad eyes are following no one can stop them no one can save me why did they choose me? why not someone else? why do i have to bear this burden of depression? People are laughing people are staring laughing and staring at me why am i the chosen one? why do i have to put up with this? cant i make it stop? just stop it forever? there is only one way one way i know how but with all these sad eyes around i will never know how. i wrote this after a close friend of mine died in october last year. |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Hey, I really appreciate your review of my poetry. Have you read its companion piece in the corner pub, My Own Lili Marlene. She does mean a lot to me, and if I have to suffer so she is happy, my friendship is such that I will do so. I too lost a buddy last year in a car accident. It was a stormy night and he wanted to drive from the university to visit his mother. Three hours later, the Catholic priest on the campus was telling me James was dead. So you really touched something in me. Thanks for giving me hope once more... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Melissa: a beautiful piece indeed and I am sorry for your loss I have had many myself and this: People are laughing people are staring laughing and staring at me I could definitely do without thank you for sharing a bit of your soul here xxoo |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
wour welcome people... if i give people hope my job here is done.... i will definitly be haveing a look at the companion piece paraboxer... i aim to please... i also have a poem in teen poetry feel free to have a look and comment |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This was good enough to give everyone else another read. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
*sniff* it's...sad. (duuhh) i like it though...i feel like that a lot "People are laughing people are staring laughing and staring at me why am i the chosen one? why do i have to put up with this? cant i make it stop? just stop it forever?" those are my exact thoughts sometimes...so...know how it feels. nice write. =) A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past, live in the present. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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