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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
am i a moment too soon or ages too late for change wreathing crying fleeing pestilence have i lost my head or is the world collapsing all around me breathing dying seeing violence is this the end or only the beginning of my hell drowning falling screaming silence "The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bonnie: is the world around us because I know I am not THAT crazy *smile* just think like this: you are sane, the world is crazy see? easy . . . nice write xxoo |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
lol, you don't know me that well, true, i'm not exactly...uh...crazy...but i have had issues in the past. nice observation though =) ...and yes I AGREE the world is also crazy. "The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Sounds like dying. But it sounds like you see the world for what it is. Then wonder if you are part of the craziness. I know theses feelings you described so nicely. Good job.  |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
very good guess! thats it! thanx Lexy, i apreciate ur comments=) i will look for some of your poems. A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past, live in the present. |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
Great write, River. Smooth like whip cream on my ice cream (uh, sorry).  Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
the world is pretty damn insane. trust me. you are sane. so am I. don't listen to them...they don't know...about what was I saying? something about lemons, perhaps And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Third Libra: whatever your intentions where from the whole ice cream thing...i'm sure there was a compliment hidden in there somewhere...so...thanx =). Wind: i love you. lol.  thats all i have to say.A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past, live in the present. |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
Sorry, I'm just weird sometimes. What I was trying to say was that I really loved the write. It was a smooth read as well. lol Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
Yep, take a good look at what's going on in the world and it does make you wonder if it's the end. Great write and a most enjoyable read. Asia |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Third Libra: It's aaaall good =). Asian Rain: thank you so much! =) by the way, love your name A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past, live in the present. |
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