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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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0 posted 2003-09-26 08:09 PM



Interuption
I just want to do my job
My chore, My life, My work
Disconnected concentrate

Interuption
Tighter grip and squeeze
Full and empty it feels gone
Tense push it away

Agitation
Lack of desire, take a break
Try again
Its all just the same

From the heart
Just a joke, I squint and study
Something new
And not at all

Bad habits follow
Like puppy dogs and little kids
Children even
And its bad, short and sweet

Relax, take a rest
You dont need to push
Strain, impress, establish
The weekends haunting

Im better than that
A trap, a hole, and something else
As it is failure
Interupted


© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2003-09-26 08:32 PM


Spoken like a true poet

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2003-09-27 02:16 AM


Sounds like you just need a really good Friday night out Craig.

Go grab some dude!


Ed

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-09-27 01:25 PM


Craig:

Disconnected concentrate

Hey now stop peeking into my head here

You must listen to
"Toxicity" by System of a Down
This write says THAT
nice job
xxoo

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2003-09-27 02:52 PM


River_ thanx


Wranx_Yeah maybe a night out wouldnt be so bad.lol


littlewing_Its my psyhic powers again.  And it wasnt intentional but sysem of a down is cool.lol


GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
5 posted 2003-09-30 06:31 PM


Greeny-intense...sometimes i feel like this when i am playing my guitar, and i hit a platou and can't get any  better, ah, life...

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
6 posted 2003-10-01 07:49 PM


Im better than that
A trap, a hole, and something else
As it is failure
Interupted

Hey Craig, I know this thought: I'm better than that. I remind myself of this everyday, its not so much a self righteous thing, but a realization of your inner strength. People scare the heck out of me sometimes, mostly with there stupidity. What are friday nights anyway? lol.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
7 posted 2003-10-01 11:15 PM


You guys are great! Thankx

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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