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Choosing rather to die
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Choosing rather to die |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
You're bleeding, no razor, no scars locked away behind those bars you're bleeding, you're fading, you're dying why must you forsake his hand choosing rather to bleed Open your eyes accept what you never would see he's reaching for you... You're drowning, no water, no waves suppressed by the daily dose of drama engulfed by your own emotions why must you forsake his hand choosing rather to drown Open your eyes accept what you never would see he's reaching for you... Finally, You look, to see him struggling, trying to reach such desperation shadowing his face, he's been hurt too such a resigned listlessness about him as he reaches for you why must you forsake his hand choosing to kill him too You opened your eyes accepting what you never would see he's reaching for you... to pull him through. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow. It takes a lot of wisdom, patience and understanding to be able to discern when someone is actually rejecting a helping hand offered lovingly, or simply a reacting to physical or emotional pain by "withdrawing". Much to think about in this one, but the feeling of helplessness is what hit home for me. Thanks for the read.  I found it thought-provoking. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I can hardly believe the feelings expressed so vividly in this poem...It had to have taken forever to write so many thoughts on paper. Great job. I enjoyed it. |
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