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Dark Poetry #4

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buckysimone
Junior Member

since 2003-10-19

Posts 27

0 posted 2003-12-03 11:18 AM

Parking lots
Of Empty hearts
Robotic minds unrest
And through the silhouettes
Silhouettes of uncertain lies
Dead roses and tattered paintings
Waxy fingers and toes
Walking like a babies beginning
Off-centered by salty pasts
Think alike
Through thick and thin
Mechanical minds and childhood dreams
Dreams of industrial futures
Up brings identical beings
Sick and tired
Death and daunting
Halting machines
Completing their stops
A new path, new people
Let's drive
Drive away
This parking lot

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-12-03 01:29 PM

I don't think I want to park there either
Let's do...let's pass this one on by. I liked.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

TheGirlNoOneKnew
Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 92
PA, USA

2 posted 2003-12-04 08:21 PM

Very deep piece. Nice and descriptive. I liked it alot.

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