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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-09-22 12:12 PM




If only there was a way
to tell you.
If only there was a way.
How much I wish I could touch you
and hear the words I wanted you to say.
You told me to be on my way,
The pit of my stomach was the voice,
that told the cost I'd have to pay.
Words will never tell, and neither will tears
the grief my heart felt when I knew
I'd never see you for all my years.
There are no words I can find,
I haven't to this day.  
You left me with no comfort,
nothing to hold on to.
Never in these years
that have gone by
have I ever found the words
to describe how crushed was I.
My spirit lost it's life within
Your were my soul, my blood
My joy, my everything
to me, life you did bring.
What happened to me
has left it's mark
Just for your touch, your smile I long.
Something sacred was lost that day
God's hand was on us and then
Something snatched us
from each other's arms
placed in your heart
no more
your boyish charm,
but instead your wish for my harm.
I had no comfort, you were gone
there was no hope to hold on to.
When there's nothing left
What was I supposed to do?
You were my strength, you were my joy
I wish I could hold you,
and feel you in my arms
Lose the hurt, and pain,
and again feel your boyish charms,
but sacred things
were stolen, we were both robbed,
and for that I lost my will,,
My spirit has sunken so deep,
for what am I supposed to live?
My souls eyes weep,
There is no love.
What can I give?

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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1 posted 2003-09-22 02:50 PM


Shara - you give of yourself here . . .
that's what . . .
I do know this . . .

Something sacred was lost that day
God's hand was on us and then
Something snatched us
from each other's arms

yes sacred indeed
beautiful writing
xxoo

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-22 03:43 PM


to you littlewings..means alot
Bless u for being so kind.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-09-24 02:21 AM


methinks you have found a way.

hugs you.

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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4 posted 2003-09-24 02:38 AM


This so brought me into a memory...  *tears*  
This sounds so much like me; isn't it strange how love can fall apart so quickly?  


~Alicia

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-09-24 09:47 AM


Thanks to both of you....

Serenity Blaze-- Thank you for that. Yes writing it out does help me. back to you girlie. If only I could get inside your mind, or rub an elbow I would really be able to express it!!!! I love reading you, but I don't see you much anymore. You are muchly missed. :'(

blackhalo-- While I thank you for your words, at the same time I feel so bad that you have had to experience this. All of us have had a love that's fallen apart at one time or another, but usually the two part ways and go about their way. I hope this was the case for you, because when one drags it on, and on it's salt to the wound. I have to wonder, why, a person would want that? I am so in hopes that was not your case. Very deliberate, and painful acts to go through. Hugs to you, too.


Bless ya both bunches,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-24-2003 09:51 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2004-05-17 04:18 AM


hugs
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
7 posted 2004-06-20 07:55 PM


Keep your head up and know there will be better times ahead, you just need to stay strong and remember God will not bring you to it if you cannot make it through.  Hugs my friend and a heartfelt write indeed.

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
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8 posted 2004-06-21 11:16 PM


Wow. This is so powerful. I really don't know what to say. I feel this one.
Thanks for sharing. I hope things look up for you soon.
This is going in my library.

WinterWren-
Counting stars wishing I was ok,
Crashing down was my biggest mistake.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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Earth
9 posted 2004-06-24 03:30 PM


wow,,,i amazed keep it peace love and respect

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

*Alli4000*
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10 posted 2004-07-01 06:42 PM




Hugz,
~Alli~

Xeonox
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11 posted 2004-07-02 01:32 PM


This is how I make my girlfriend feel when I try to break up with her.
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
12 posted 2004-07-17 09:41 AM


"All I want is a crying shoulder"

Don't we all want one, and i have one to offer too ........Great Read

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

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