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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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0 posted 2004-01-24 02:07 AM


is that your heart beating so loudly
i can feel the vibrations
i finally feel it..
do you know how long i've wanted to say that
to say that maybe..
just maybe...
you might love me back
you might feel the same
oh god let this be real,
dont let me be dreaming..  
i dont want to wake up
this is so cliche...
and i love it

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-01-24 03:13 AM


lol, some cliches are good
best wishes

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-24 10:31 AM


agreed, thats the kind of cliche that makes life worth living
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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