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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-01-24 12:12 PM



I dreamt of you the other night
In all your splender and delight
I dreamt we were together
Destined to be forever
When I awoke I prayed a prayer
that this dream wouldnt be just another error
As I go on with my day
I look for words to say
to express what it is I feel for you
the words that best fit and put my soul to, rest are three words
that express my deepest feeling for you
"I love you"...always and forever.
When the world is dark
and the end is near
I will still love you.
In my darkest hour when death hears my cry
I will still love you.
And after I make this journey through life and I am in a new
I will be at the gates of heaven waiting on you.
Looking over you, and still... Loving you.

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-01-24 12:19 PM


This was a bit sad..but so beautiful!

I am becoming inspired!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2004-01-24 02:53 AM


Welcome to Passions!  Very romantic poem!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2004-01-24 04:08 AM


Welcome to Passions.
You expressed your heart's feelings. beautifully.
Margherita

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-24 01:17 PM


This one I feel from head to toe,,,,,very touching and such a familiar feeling
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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