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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-01-24 12:09 PM


There is a storm deep within my torn heart
releasing its fury when ever we're apart.
It's torrential down pours flood my mind,
with memories I thought I'd never find.
Lightning strikes my soul, sparking new calmness,
as my soul meditates on your loveliness.
Thunder echoes heated, passionate love,
for the one God chose to descend from above.
Wind blows my spirit in a new direction
as I bask in beauties reflection,
that heaven casts across my now blue sky,
once the storm of my heart has run dry.
That's when standing in awe of devastation,
my battered heart gives it's own confession.
"Maybe its the sense of longing for you
that won't allow my true skies to shine through."

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-01-24 12:14 PM


WOW! Welcome to Passions....Like your name!

Romantics are more than welcome here! you will find out....Great poem!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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2 posted 2004-01-24 01:23 AM


This is beautiful!!! I'm glad to see you here.
I think you'll like it. It's good to see
another hopeless romantic around. I'm
one, too. LOL
Hugs  
Ethel

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